I really like the looseness and energy in your art....
I agree with Kenmo.
Moreover, for me, this one has a feel like loose its of "paper" sort of magnetically being pulled in to form a head/face. As such I could easily see this being animated where the loose bits would fly in from some unseen force to sculpt this person's image. It feels like it's moving and active.
"Not a bit is wasted and the best is yet to come. . ." -- remembered from a dream