I think this is a really good one. I have a book on Zorn. Neat stuff. I haven't compared yours with his by looking at the book, but from my memory, you captured much of the essence of what he was about.
But your painting is really good. Glad to see you looking at these other artists as a resource for painting. Feels like playing a popular song on my guitar. Of course you're farther as a painter than I am as a musician, but it's a similar idea. I mean I would be nowhere without the existing songs. Nobody questions my playing those songs. It's an acceptable way to learn, and at some point I will have assimilated them and come out with my own style, something of a synthesis. And no doubt you will too in painting.
You seem to be selecting very good paintings to work with. This is a fine job.
Bartender, fix me a moon river. . .in a TIFFANY GLASS!!!!!!!