Whistler 2

[eighty+]

I'm a bit happyer now so what you think

[jibes]

Very interesting! I like the composition very much. I personally would like to see more boldness in contrast however.

[MacPix]

Very expressive faces!

[eighty+]

thanks Jibes I go along with that think I'll move vase in more possible
darken the light tan at the back that would show her up
more also touch more colour on face's more attension to
hair

thanks Macpix sorry forgot name but being an oldie it take's time to
sink in face's the back could be better I'll have another
go OK

[Caesar]

... nobody is whistling here ... Seriously, You got this too! A really graceful image with the right proportions, tones and lines.

[eighty+]

Thanks Caesar but I've started afresh